UNWINDING LIFE
Oh!dear life
Please explain yourself
I fail to realize your pace
I somehow lag behing in this race.
Is it always the irony that prevails
or is it something like
a heaven's voice that hails.
Is it the pain that purifies
Or is it the success that drives.
What is the 'ultimate' purpose
Why are we living these lives
Are we to follow the same trends
or are we to soar high in the skies.
Sometimes i do doubt my ability
and finally this thing only leads to my disabilities
But i fear..i may not overestimate
May not life again play its coin of fate
I am the energy flowing in me
I am the fear that finally ruins thee
Whenever i stop to see you by my eyes
I feel the world is rushing besides
Its then, that i cry out for help
Oh!dear life
Please explain yourself.
Short but effective. Basic questions raised in a delicate and genteel style.
ReplyDelete"I am the energy flowing in me
I am the fear that finally ruins thee" seems to be curtly drifting. Awesome. I mean yeah.
Contemplations! :)
hey thnx!! every poem that arises out of you simply says a bit of u.. :)
ReplyDeletewonderful creation!!!Direct from the heart..particularly loved these lines - "Is it always the irony that prevails or is it something like a heaven's voice that hails."
ReplyDeleteand ya its both ways true-pain purifies and success drives..success has no existence without failure and vice-versa..{i knw ,u knw all this..phir bhi ;)}
keep up the good work!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next article/poem...
thnx apoorva di!! n ya failure and success aren't opposites..they go hand in hand... :)
ReplyDeleten ya next article is very soon anticipated.. :) :)
Hey! btw, "apple fall" is grammatically incorrect!
ReplyDeletemake it - when an apple falls or apples fall.
Just a suggestion. :)
ya...i know that!! but it was just an expression!! anyways thanx!! i'l surely change it..
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ReplyDeleteawesome lines...
ReplyDelete" Sometimes i do doubt my ability
and finally this thing only leads to my disabilitiesBut i fear..i may not overestimate
May not life again play its coin of fate"
Exactly what i think...and feel..
again .. impeccable expressions putforth aptly into words...!!
thnx!! n ya i do understand very clearly..why even you think so!! :)
ReplyDeleteeverytime i read ur piece i fall short of words not because ur work makes me speechless but because i am so awed by the depth in u dat i succumb to my own limited thoughts..!sumedha plz channelize ur energies in being more professional in ur approach and do what i told u...! im so sure ul b brilliant if u think of being a freelancer! ur work definitely needs to b read out by masses..! ur superb..!
ReplyDeletethnx!! n people like u only are the inspiration behind such works.. n ya i would talk to u personally about this thing..freelancing and all.. thnx a tonne!
ReplyDeleteI think u r upto some extent right about realizing life.What life is all about?
ReplyDeleteHmmm it sounds good....
according to me life is something which is very complex. And we humans are so low in our thinking it is impossible for us to understand the complexity of life.
As said by a great mystic author Mikhail Noami that
"Life is illusion and these wordly things r worthless then why we r running after these and wasting our time..."
Knowledge diagram follows like this: (Literature)-->
(Physics,Maths,Bio,Chem,etc)---->All leads to (spritualism and mystism). So this proves upto some extent our purpose of cmng in this world not only to be a part of wordly objects but also to understand our spritual strength.
Lovely poem. Its intelligent of you to leave it for the readers to decide the face of life; while trying to analyse it.
ReplyDeleteTeri poem college magazine me chhap gyi... guaranteed..
we r waiting fr ur next blog.plzz continue writing
ReplyDelete@ ashu: thanx a lot for appreciating it, please can u reveal your identity,so that its convenient for me to contact u the next time.
ReplyDelete@ sagar: ya sure..next article would be posted very soon.
@sumedha: late reply, sorry. Its ashutosh Bharti, Y10uc084.
ReplyDelete@ashutosh: thanx!!! i'l surely giv it 4 the magazine!:)
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